Nonfiction Essays

Eight Essays on Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein

Originally published on March 18, 2010.

It's a bit of an understatement to say that I'm a big fan of Frankenstein. Here are some thoughts on that extraordinary novel and its creator. In my ever shockingly humble opinion, I think any of these essays would represent excellent fodder for a class paper. Plagiarists: have at it. But remember: your teacher knows how to use google too.

Frankenstein: A brilliant story when she finally gets to it.

The 18th and 19th century epistolary novel and evolving literary trends


Let me state at the outset that I believe Frankenstein is one of the greatest novels ever written. I say this lest anyone fail to get past the paragraph below and come away with the view that I think it anything less than a work of genius. People have short attention spans, which is the point of this essay.

If Frankenstein were submitted for publication today, it seems unlikely that it would ever be published at all, or, at the very least, Shelley would have had to self-publish it. It’s unlikely that it would ever achieve the widespread popularity it now enjoys for the simple reason that few modern readers would ever make it far enough into the book before becoming bored to tears and turning on cable television.

I would challenge anyone to set down the novel after getting to the point that Frankenstein crafts his monster. From that point forward, it is simply riveting. But this doesn’t happen until page 40. An editor today would advise her to cut the first 39 pages.

It is not the epistolary approach itself that is the problem. One could conceivably write a story in epistolary form that immediately presents a hook, and engages the interest of the reader. Frankenstein abjectly fails to do this, however. It is, in my opinion, the one flaw in an otherwise outstanding work of genius.

The epistolary style had its heyday in the 18th century, just before Shelley’s time, and had already begun to fall out of fashion. It is still used today, on occasion, though rarely. One has to wonder why Shelley used this device, which she essentially abandons shortly into the work. The letters from Captain Walton to his sister slowly and painfully introduce the reader to Victor Frankenstein. There are twenty pages of these letters and they tell us almost nothing of interest. Then Captain Walton is allegedly recoding, “as nearly as possible in his own words what he has related to me.” The vast majority of the novel is then told through Frankenstein, just like any story told in first-person point of view, with nothing epistolary about it, but it is, the reader is to understand, actually written down by Captain Walton in one enormous quotation (or, rather, paraphrasation) in a very long letter.

One theory as to why Shelley chose to tell the story this way is that Frankenstein dies shortly before the end of the tale. The monster then makes a speech and vows to kill himself. Frankenstein could not possibly have recorded these events, being, as he was, quite dead. So, desiring the intimacy of first person narration, but bearing in mind that this narrator was destined to make it almost, but not quite, to the end of the story, Shelley employed this innovative device.

A modern writer, faced with the same problem, might take a limited omniscient point of view through most of the novel, allowing a focus on the protagonist, but still permitting commentary after his death. Or she might employ the framing device of the epistolary form, but with much less buildup. The reader needs to feel a sense of the conflict by the second page, not the 40th.

(Note: my own novel suffers from a very similar problem. The conflict does not really pick up until page 61. I too had reasons for doing so. I was deliberately forestalling the conflict to achieve a certain effect. It worked for some people and not for others. This is an entirely separate topic and I apologize for this digression, but did not wish to be accused of blatant hypocrisy.)

This is not just a matter of style and changing fashions in literature. It is, rather, a reflection of the fact that literature can be thought of as a science. There is an evolving literary technology, and we 21st century writers have the benefit of examining the literature that came before us, just as 21st century scientists have the benefit of the work of their predecessors. Modern writers have learned, through the trials and errors over the course of centuries, how to hook readers from the very start and keep them hooked. We can hardly fault Mary Shelley for failing to incorporate scientific advances that didn’t exist in her time.

This is the only criticism I have of what is otherwise one of the most remarkable works in all of English literature. And, while my premise is that literature itself is an evolving, progressing technology, and that Mary did not perceive this aspect of the science of fiction, we can easily forgive her this, in consideration of the fact that she essentially invented science fiction.